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scarlet-rain
4th November 2007, 02:03 AM
A while ago, I made a topic (http://www.radioaukiman.com/forums/showthread.php ?t=632) asking for critique on some recipe cards I was designing for my Design class. Well, based on the advice of you guys at RA and a few other forums, I have made the following changes: made one word bigger in each title
indented ingredients and method for 'invisible border' effect
changed 1/2 and 1/4 to ½ and ¼ symbols
removed hyphenation
added logo to front
added outer glow/drop shadow and emboss to front title
aligned ingredients and method to top
converted all recipes to Australian language (e.g. pounds/inches to grams/cm)http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs21/f/2007/30 7/0/4/0407d972c01dea69.jpg (http://scarlet-rain.deviantart.com/art/Archer-s-Recipe-Cards-68905767)

This is the finished product. You can see the cards in more detail here:

Blueberry Waffles (http://www.golivewire.com/images/ib/162943_f.jpg)
Wildberry Pie (http://www.golivewire.com/images/ib/162942_f.jpg)
Date Muffin (http://www.golivewire.com/images/ib/162941_f.jpg)
Lemonade (http://www.golivewire.com/images/ib/162940_f.jpg)
Gooey Marshmallow Cookies (http://www.golivewire.com/images/ib/162939_f.jpg)
Lemon Meringue Pie (http://www.golivewire.com/images/ib/162938_f.jpg)
Easy Mochachino (http://www.golivewire.com/images/ib/162937_f.jpg)
Jam Scones (http://www.golivewire.com/images/ib/162936_f.jpg)
Chocolate Raspberry Truffle (http://www.golivewire.com/images/ib/162935_f.jpg)
White Wedding Cake (http://www.golivewire.com/images/ib/162934_f.jpg)

Thanks everyone!

juniormet
4th November 2007, 08:12 AM
They are BRILLIANT, great work Scarlet !

biskits
4th November 2007, 08:27 AM
love the work ! presentation is excellent very professional looking

fozz
4th November 2007, 08:53 AM
Those cards definitely do the job Scarlett ! Can we actually buy this stuff or was it a fictitious product range made for the project? Cos I sure as hell feel like eating now that I saw them hahaha :p

nicely done :)

3nyaz
4th November 2007, 08:59 AM
all brilliant, if I had to choose a favourite (based on the food value) I would have to say the blueberry waffle one does it for me lol :)

MaDroX
4th November 2007, 10:39 AM
Well done (^_^) look a treat lol

Aukiman
4th November 2007, 12:12 PM
good work Scarlett, they look perfect!

scarlet-rain
4th November 2007, 10:38 PM
Those cards definitely do the job Scarlett ! Can we actually buy this stuff or was it a fictitious product range made for the project? Cos I sure as hell feel like eating now that I saw them hahaha :p

nicely done :)



The recipes were chosen based on how well they fit the layout rather than how easy/yummy they are, but you are welcome to try them. Just give me a buzz with which ones you like and I'll send away. They were made for a fictional company called Archer's.

mishmosh
5th November 2007, 05:19 AM
nice work scarlett, I thought the first lot were excellent but you put the finishing touches on and now they are even better :)

Gu^n3r
5th November 2007, 06:30 AM
mmmm im hungry

wheelmeister
5th November 2007, 06:31 AM
all brilliant, if I had to choose a favourite (based on the food value) I would have to say the blueberry waffle one does it for me lol :)


+1 hehe they look awesome, should post the recipes in the recipe section ! :yep:

stomp
6th November 2007, 04:48 AM
nice work scarlett-rain

Caboose
6th November 2007, 04:22 PM
yummy tops scarlet